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Monday 11 Sep 2006, 05:59 PM

Okay Darlings. For chapter seven, I will need ideas! This is where you can fill in with ideas and sugestions as to how the story can end up or what should happen for the chapter so I know where to go from here.

Thanks.

 

Chapter Seven

Chapter Seven

At the Beach

 

 

            The next couple days of my vacation were spent at Anahita’s home. She had told Jer that I could stay over the week before.  she made an effort to grab me before I made other plans.  “I had to kidnap you from my brother for at least two days!”, she teased as she drove in her convertible.  My face became red with embarrassment.  “Okay Anahita. You’re right! I am in love with Freddie and can’t wait to see him again. It’s a good thing that you did steal me away. Too much of something is a bad thing.”, I admitted.  “Not always. You can never have too much of a good thing.”, she stressed.  “That’s true.”, I sighed, leaning my head back against the cushioned seat.  I was almost asleep when I felt her tap me on the shoulder to let me know  we were there.  Her house was spacious. She showed me around. It had three bedrooms and two full baths.One room, she converted in to a storage room. My guest room, where I was to be sleeping, felt comfy. I trailed along the walls and felt my way around it, farmilluaring myself to its surroundings.  “I put your bag by the bed.”, she said, giving me directions as to where it lay. I reached in it and took out my jewelry that Freddie gave me.I got the ring on, but the necklace was difficult. I fidgeted around for what seemed like hours trying to get the clasps to go in to place.  “Need help with that?”, Anahita asked.  “Yes. Please!”, I said annoyed.  “I never was good at putting on jewelry.”  After the necklace was fasend, we went out the room and down the hall to the kitchen. As we ate soup and sandwitches, she asked me how I was enjoying myself so far.  “I’m having a wonderful time! I’ve ever been anywhere outside America before.” “It must be quite an adventure for you then!”, she remarked.  “It is.”, I said with a smile.  “In America, as you probably have heard from Freddie, the cars drive on the right side of the road, opposite from here. I think some of the food is different as well. I’ve always wanted to travel outside the states.”  “And here you are!”, she finished, as I took a bite of my sandwitch. . “Have you been to the beach here yet?”, she asked with excitement.  “No. I sure haven’t. I’ve only just gotten here!”, I teased.  “Well, tomorrow, we’ll be going to the beach


Monday 11 Sep 2006, 05:52 PM

Chapter Six

My Third Wish

 

night, I had several pleasant dreams of Freddie. One was of us being in the studio with Brian Roger and John. Another was of Freddie, kissing me lightly on the mouth, and whispering softly,  “Come to me darling. It’s all right. I won’t hurt you.”  I could control my dreams, even if I always couldn’t be in charge of things that happened in reality. I thought to myself,  “No! I’m not ready! I’d rather wait till we are married.”  I remember saying that to him in my dream, and he had said with understanding, to take my time.  “Even when we are married, and you still aren’t ready, I’ll wait for you.”  And then the dream subsided. Waking up, I felt around the bed for Freddie, but he wasn’t there, of course. Dreams are like that, I guess.  “Sweetie.”  A hand reached out for mine. It was Mrs. Bulsara.  “Freddie isn’t here.”, she said knowingly.  I blushed. I didn’t know she was there, and I didn’t think I said something out loud that pertained to my dreams!  “I know he isn’t. I’ll see him later.”, I said in surprise.  “Honey, you were calling Freddie’s name. I assumed you were just starting to wake up. I remember having the sorts of dreams you are having. I was young like you once. “  She wanted to talk to me about my love for Freddie.  “You love him. I can tell.”  She left me to undress in to new clothes and get ready for my time with the man I loved. 

Once downstairs, I ate the breakfast Mrs. Bulsara prepared for me and talked with Mr. Bulsara about my evening out with his son.  “He’s such a polite person, a real gentleman.” I commented.  “You both brought him up well.”  “Thank you.” they both said in unison.  Now, it was Mr. Bulsara’s turn to speak about my affection for Freddie.  “My dear, you are perfect for our boy.” he began.  “I could see how he interacted with you. He’s so good with you.”  Mrs. Bulsara cut in.  “Bomi, I could tell the instant connection. It’s as if he knew Jacqueline forever.” I couldn’t wait to see Freddie! I felt the same way. From the time we met to the time we departed from one another, we chatted on and intermingled together, I felt like we had been friends in high school or something.  I heard a knock on the door and asked Mrs. Bulsara if I could answer it.  “Go ahead!” she smiled warmly.  When I saw Freddie standing there, I ran straight in to his embrace!  “Hello there!” he said in surprise.  “I didn’t expect you to answer. How are you?”  “Good. Oh Freddie I missed you so!” I cried.  “I missed you too darling.


Monday 11 Sep 2006, 05:44 PM

Chapter Five

It All Start At the Piano

 

            Once inside, we ate our food and talked of our piano lessons.  “I took piano lessons at “Panchgani.”, Freddie remarked.  “Everyone told me I played very well.”  “My lessons were short lived. My piano instructor charged too much and she once told my mom that she couldn’t teach me. She said I was playing guitar chords on the piano.”  I explained.     “Strange.”, he observed.  “Guitar chords are just the same as piano ones. Some people are stupid and don’t know what the heck they are talking about.” “She was rude.”, I said in anger.  “I could teach you more.”, Freddie suggested.  “I’d love that! That will be so much fun!”  After our dinner was completed, Freddie instructed me where the piano was situated. This was a large grand piano, that looked as if it would be a burden to lift in to a limo. I wondered how anyone loaded that in the stadium for a concert. I asked Freddie who told me that another piano is usually used.  “I don’t take my home piano away from home darling. It’s way too big for that sort of thing. Here. Let me sit beside you.”  I felt his hands brush mine as we composed a little nonsense. Fooling around on the piano is always fun! After improvising for a while, I started picking out the chords to “Love Of My Life”,  (A favorite Queen song), hoping I wasn’t going to mess up. Concentrating too hard, I stumbled over a chord.  “Darling. its d minor on the” Bring it back”  part.”, he coached.  “Thanks.”, I said, smiling.  “What are the other chords to that? ? I never could figure them out.”  “You told me you could play by ear. Right? Here, scoot over a little so I can play it to you and then you repeat what you hear.”  I could notice a lump forming  in my throat.  “This is too overwhelming!”, I thought, as I moved over for him.  “Is this the way he usually was with the other members of the band, and his staff?”, I asked myself.  He wasn’t unkind in his demands however. He was trying to help me out.   I played the part back for him, almost perfectly.  “It takes practice, darling. It doesn’t come over night. That goes with everything. Cooking on a stove, will some day come natural to you.”, he advised.  “I thank you, Freddie. That helps a lot to hear you say that.” I said truthfully.  “If I hear one more thank you out of your mouth, I’ll tickle you!”, he teased.  “You don’t need to thank me. I love helping people. Now, I’m interested in more of your playing. What else can you play?”  I thought for a moment.


Monday 11 Sep 2006, 05:26 PM

Chapter Four

 

A Special Evening

      

Freddie felt terrible about the incident. He couldn’t stop talking about it. Finally, he told everyone that he had to go home and rest. Anahita said to him,  “Freddie,  she’s not upset at you.”  “I know.”, he said with tears in his eyes. “I feel dreadful about making such a scene, and I didn’t mean to hurt her.”  “It’s okay Mr. Mercury.”, I said abruptly.  “It’s over with. It’s okay. I’m not hurt or angry with you. If I was upset, I would have  told you. It’s all right.”  Trying to convince him wasn’t easy. He wouldn’t hear of it. He had to have the last word.  “Let me make it up to you, darling.”, he said hopefully.  “There is nothing for you to make up!”, I objected. “My dear, in my heart, I feel appalled. Please, let me make it up to you. My behavior was shameful, my dear.”  I finally gave in, thinking that he would have his way anyhow.  “Fine.”, I sighed.” Then, I laughed.  “Have it your way!”  “Okay. Do you have a nice dress of some sort?”, he asked.  I was unable to speak! I wasn’t expecting to go to a fancy restaurant or even to a party, but I told him that I had some dresses and before I knew it, I was changing in to one   and saying goodbye to his family, as the limo pulled up.  “Have a good time!”, Mrs. Bulsara shouted from the kitchen.  “Thanks! I will! See you when I get back!”, I called back.  On the way to our destination, we talked about a variety of things, from different types of foods we loved to eat, to the music we liked. We decided on heading to a nearby restaurant called The Shatoe. He said the food there was really good.  While inside “The Shatoe, I ordered a hamburger with Swiss cheese and mushrooms on it.. Freddie had a stake dinner, with a small baked potato. As we waited for our meals, we chatted on and on.  “So, what’s life like on the road?”, I asked curiously as I sipped on a glass of ice water.  “It’s really quite exhausting.”  he said with honesty.  “You don’t have much time by yourself. Fame isn’t everything darling. There’s always a part of you that longs for privacy. How long have you been a fan of Queen?”, he inquired.  “Oh my!”, I amused.  “That’s quite a difficult question, for I have been a fan for years now. I’ve loved you all ever since your first album came out.”  His voice took on a surprised manner.  “Oh! You have our first album? The one that’s just entitled “Queen”?”  “Yes.”, I commented.  “I didn’t think anyone would rush out to buy it!”, he said in bewilderment.  “My favorite song on it is “My Fairy King.”, I added.Perminent Link | Feedback (0)


Monday 11 Sep 2006, 04:32 PM

Chapter 3

 

Meeting Freddie

 

            The plane ride was very tiring. I slept most of the way there. Of course, the stuartess came over to offer drinks and food, which I readily accepted, but I fell asleep some more. I guess I was preparing for the action I would receive when I’ve arrived. When I finally did arrive, my legs wouldn’t move from sitting there for so long. I almost fell off the stairs going down, but a hand stretched out to meet mine.  “Watch your step there girly! Are you alright?”  “Oh yes. I’m okay. Just a bit clumsy I guess from sitting so long.”  It was anahita.  Someone else got my bags. A man’s voice spoke to Anahita.  “I’ll take her bags to the car and I’ll be there to help out if she needs it. She might need two hands to steady her with the way she walked off.”  “Dad!” she protested.  “She’s fine. I’ll take care of her, and you get the bags. Okay?”  “Okay. Fine with me.”, he laughed.  Her dad had a slight accent. I wondered what nationality they were. Not wanting to be rude and press the subject on her, we walked on to the car, where she and I got safely inside. Anahita’s dad asked me how the flight was and many interesting questions about America. I supposed that he’d never known what it was like there. Maybe he’d read about it, but had never been, just as I’d never been anywhere out of America myself.  “Well, the weather in some parts of America is nice, some of it is awful and some isn’t too bad. You just have to go where the climate suits your needs.” I explained as he asked me about the weather there. He asked many other questions, which I tried to answer as best as I could. Finally, we reached the house, which stood on a hill top. As I walked inside, I noticed a warm atmosphere and I knew that these people, who lived here, were genuinely friendly and I told myself not to be frightened. New places sometimes gave me the creeps if I didn’t know anyone, which I guess is normal for a lot of people. Her father took me to a chair in the living room, where I sat patiently as she came in the room with some tea, which I had requested when the offering was made of course. As I took in my surroundings and sipped the steaming hot liquid, two other female voices came in and sat down. Anahita graciously got up and introduced me to her mom and sister.  “Mom, this is Jacqueline Ware, the girl I have been telling you about from America. Jacqueline, this is my mom. Mrs. Jer Bulsara.”  “It’s a pleasure to meet you Mrs. Bulsara...” I said, as I shook her tiny soft hands.  “This is my sister, Kashmira. She’s a bit shy, but she’ll talk to you once she gets to know you a bit more.” she said.  “Hello Jacqueline. It’s nice to know you.”Perminent Link | Feedback (1)


Monday 11 Sep 2006, 04:25 PM

      Chapter 2

 

This Isn’t Happening! Is it?

The next few days were spent working. I worked as a receptionist for a firm called” Starlight academy. I’ve gotten good compliments about my typing skills and phone voice. My boss recommended me to a higher possession. I was thrilled at the chance to get better pay, since I was only making five dollars an hour. That’s not much. So I was glad when Mr. Rucker, my boss, called me in to explain to me that he was moving me up the ladder. I would be receiving 10 dollars per hour!  “Cool!” I thought. “Now, I can get my kitten and possibly get enough money to buy that new record player I’ve been wanting!”  The needle, by this time, was getting pretty warn out from playing my extensive collection of queen albums, and I desperately needed a new turn table. It was an old one, given to me by my grandpa, who had it when he was little. You can imagine how old that thing was! So, after toiling for eight hours, I went out to “Seers” department store to try and find a new record player, but the manager said they were all sold out! Darn! The rest of the day was spent sulking over not being able to play the newest Queen album, “News Of the World”, which I bought a couple days previously before it broke. before I went to sleep though, mom came in to the room.  “I have something you are going to dream about for the next week before your 24th birthday! she chattered excitedly.  “What mom!  I taunted playfully. “Is it something wonderful? Or are you fibbing to me?”  “Now, would I fib to you?” She questioned with a teasing error to her voice.  “Okay. No you wouldn’t, I said with a smile. Now tell me what it is!”  I could tell she was grinning from ear to ear as she spoke these words.  “For your birthday, you are going to England and meeting Anahita there!”  I couldn’t believe what she was saying!  “You’re not serious!” I shrieked.  “Yes. You are going in a week from today. So we need to prepare for the journey. You are staying for two weeks. So, we need to get everything together.”  I still was in shock over what she was telling me!  “You are totally serious! Right?”  “Yes. she said with a laugh. I am serious. You are going!”  She was right. I dreamed all night about what my vacation was going to turn out like. Would I have a good time? Of course I would! Come on! It’s England, for gosh sakes!

            The next week was spent preparing for the two weeks I would spend in England. I had to get some new clothes.  I mean, if I was going to England, I would need


Sunday 10 Sep 2006, 11:35 PM

Chapter       

Birthday Surprise

 

My birthday was coming up in a few more days and I couldn’t wait! My mom asked what kind of cake I wanted, and I made a list of all the presents I desired. However, there was one thing I forgot to add to this extensive list of items. I always wanted to meet Freddie Mercury, the lead singer of queen. It was one of my biggest dreams, but I somehow felt that I would never get to meet him. Even if I did get a chance, I would feel a little nervous. What if he reacted funny about my blindness?  “Oh well... You might not get to meet him anyway! So what’s the big deal?”   I thought to myself, as I slowly walked over to my dresser to spray on a perfume. My thoughts drifted away as I took my time brushing my hair. I did have a crush on him. But why? There were rumors circling around that he preferred   men over women. If this is true, then why am I drooling over a guy who wouldn’t even show the slightest interest in me? I knew it was crazy, but hey! A girl can dream. Can’t she? One of my closest friends, Anahita, kept on telling me about her famous brother. That made me stop brushing my hair to think a minute. I wondered who he was. She lived in England, so I thought about who it could be from England that was famous.   “Paul McCartney? No. It would have been on the news or something or in a biography. Mick Jagger? No. That would have been on the news too. It’s 1978 for goodness sakes! Things like that are on the news or in the papers all the time!”  

            A couple days went by and didn’t really know how to express my wishes on meeting Freddie for my birthday. Somehow though, I overheard a conversation in the living room about something. All I could hear was mom’s voice.

            “Yeh. She’d really love that! Okay. I won’t say anything. I promise. Okay. Bye now. I’ll see you there.” And I heard the click of the phone receiver hitting the cradle.

            “”What was that all about?” I wondered to myself.  “Must be very important, or special.”  I kind of felt guilty for ease-dropping. Well, maybe it wasn’t ease-dropping. Just overhearing. I went out in to the kitchen to get a glass of iced tea and the phone rang again. This time, I went to answer. It was Anahita... “Hello girl! What have you been up to?” I asked.  “Nothing much. Mom is having us all over for tea at her place, and I really don’t feel like going out today. It’s been raining here off and on. How’s the weather there?” She asked inquisitively.  “It’s sunny here. It’s not too hot and not too cold. It’s just perfect.” I commented.  “Well, shucks! I wish I wa

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